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Dead Air – DivX Version (Normal Quality), iPod/iPhone Version
November 17, 2009 | | Leave a Comment
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IMDB rating: 0.00 Plot: Logan Burnhardt is the ego-king of the airwaves, but his unflappable persona is put to the test when a terrorist bio-attack unleashes a plague of flesh-ripping maniacs on Los Angeles. |
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Actors: Ackerman J. Hunter,Adams Robert,Anders Kevin,Aspajo Cromwell,Bernsen Corbin,Butbeka Ziv,Carter Johnothan,Davis Brandon,Davis Jason,Deluca Allan,Dordei Federico,Drake Larry,Durham Michael,Sci-Fi,Thriller,
DO you think that this poem is good?
"A walk in the park"
Silence echoes off the air–
Reverberating through her bones.
Dripping red orchids bleed their last breath…
Dirty Doves pick at her eyeballs they show the truth.
The streets they are yellow. They are melting. Melting and swirling into one.
She teethes at the roses, peeling off their flesh.
Underneath she finds a violinist singing a misery tale…
A castle of possums capture her mind, all in rows, they fake a painful death.
A fetus angel flew off the birth giving tree to speak of unknown life.
A child dressed in white sells blue to the refugees at the corner.
Violent Violets are breathing, scraping the floor, roots of all beginnings.
An elegant black crow sits perched on the lampost…
Cawing for sanity.
Her stride begins to slow down, she feels her body shiver.
The ground has an imprinting scent of iron and heat.
Red, Red, everywhere her eyes flutter dead.
i mean i know what i am saying, such as the child in white dressed in white who sells blue to refugees at corner. it means an innocent person has to sell drugs to get by in life, and the refugees like refugees are people who take drugs to get away from things. And I dont know do u understand what i am saying in some of my lines or the whole meaning of the poem? I mean it dosent matter, poem has no rights or wrongs. Its your perception, but what do u think I am saying?
i dont rhyme in my poetry, because i believe it stops the flow in the mind.
i honestly dont belive in tht whole fancy schmancy poetry rules because real poetry to me atleast r the free will of the writers. I mean dont get me wrong shakespare is awesome with his sonnets, i have written sonnets, They are hard but i like to just go with the flow. Rhyming tends to stop a train of thought.
well it had nothing to do with vampires. and u obviously dont get the deeper meaning. lol.
i really really really dont think as a person who writes tht poetry fixes anything. Lol, it personally to me stops a train of thought. U dont mean what u say no more if ur fishing for a word just to rhyme with oyur last scheme.
i didnt read it. 5/5
yank33s | Nov 16, 2009
I totally get it, and I love it!!! You might want to try to rhyme some of it though??? Idk…. poetic license of course but thats just my opinion lol.
Niya | Nov 16, 2009
It’s horrible. Please go watch a teen vampire movie and leave us alone.
Nate | Nov 16, 2009
this is the kind of pom you keep to yourself because you know the symbols behind everything. if you write more poetry themn make the symbols a little more consise and easier to pick out. and like earlier, i know free verse is good but rhyme a little add some flow. get a rhythem going in your mind and bust it out. read the "songs of innocence and experience" this will be good for you. it makes a story and adds symbols and it flows. plus be like blake make your poems and write another one contrdicting everything in the others. like the chimney sweep… or if you like to think "tyger" is fun…. fins the symbols
Bry B | Nov 16, 2009